I am a student in the Uru Mānuka Cluster. In 2021 I am in Year 6 and my teacher is Miss Rennell. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note....some work won't be edited - just my first drafts, so there may be some surface errors. I would love your feedback, comments, thoughts and ideas.
Monday, 27 May 2019
How to make a comment
I have been learning how to make comments on other peopleś blogs. here is my poster. please leave my a comment.
4 comments:
To support my learning I ask you to comment as follows:
1. Something positive - Begin with a greeting. Talk about something you like about what I have shared.
2. Thoughtful - A comment that will mean something to me to let me know you read/watched or listened to what I had to say. - use any language.
3. Something helpful - Give me some ideas for next time or ask me a question.
Encourage me to make another post
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Hey Hendrik,
ReplyDeleteI really like the stripes in the background of your poster. I also really like your big bold title. I wonder if you put that car because you like cars or whether it has something to do with commenting?
- Miss Morgan
hi hendrick brayden here just saying i like how you have put so much ifort in to this great job. But next time could you not put photos about other stuff like lamborghinis.
ReplyDeleteHello hendrik friend brayden
ReplyDeleteHi Hendrik
ReplyDeleteI like how you are doing a comment slide.
I also like how you are adding the right thing to do a comment.
I think you need to do it in order in slide by slide.
From Robert