I am a student in the Uru Mānuka Cluster. In 2021 I am in Year 6 and my teacher is Miss Rennell. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note....some work won't be edited - just my first drafts, so there may be some surface errors. I would love your feedback, comments, thoughts and ideas.
Friday, 26 October 2018
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To support my learning I ask you to comment as follows:
1. Something positive - Begin with a greeting. Talk about something you like about what I have shared.
2. Thoughtful - A comment that will mean something to me to let me know you read/watched or listened to what I had to say. - use any language.
3. Something helpful - Give me some ideas for next time or ask me a question.
Encourage me to make another post
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I look like a good work
ReplyDeleteKia Ora Hendrik, I am Julia from Rimu.
ReplyDeleteI am sure that your work was great but the link didn't work and I didn't get to see what you did. Apart from that, I hope you enjoyed writing the post.
Kind Regards
Julia
Yaldhurst Model School
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ReplyDeleteHi Hendrik, I like how you like going on your trampoline, but you can write a bit more.
Have you ever thort of some thing else? from Kane